Minutes from 12-13-11 Meeting

Attendance: Steve. Cathy, Shaun, Ann, Doug, Shawn, Adam, Keith, Delia, Melissa, Lori, Wendy

I. Critique:

Delia was first as we discussed her family’s story. Everyone seemed to be in agreement that we love the historical points, but want to hear the story told in her voice, which is beautiful and descriptive. There was a bit of discussion and some suggestions of how to include letters without losing the rhythm of the piece.

Shawn’s submission, which is loosely based on local history, spurred conversation on conflicts that can occur with changing events in the past, and if keeping to proper etiquette and traditions is important if that isn’t the main thrust of the story.

II. Other Business:

Doug is editing an on-line Science Fiction journal, and told us a little more about it. If anyone would like to be a volunteer reader of submissions, or if you’re a sci-fi writer and would like to submit 75,000 words or less with the theme of communication, contact Doug through the website.

For Our Next Meeting on January 10, 2012 7-9 PM:

Because of the number of people who attend the meeting, we’ve decided to concentrate on 2 submissions per month. Therefore, we’ve set aside room for Patricia, who was unable to attend the last meeting. Cathy will submit, and Doug is interested in hearing what people have to say about “Caravan City”. This is a longer than usual submission, but he’s interested in an overall critique, not a word-by-word critique.

We hope you can join us!